Goal
setting is the first step to success. It provides us a direction,
purpose as well as motivation and drive for ambition. This holds true
for everyone and to all fields of endeavor. Likewise, setting my goals
to achieve in Englcom will help me improve my writing skills, expand my
knowledge and become a more responsible student.
One goal that I want to achieve is to pass the course and be the best
student that I can possibly be. I wish to learn, communicate and become prepared
for writing tasks and successfully complete as much material I can with respect
to assignments and activities in my Englcom course. I want my efforts to be
recognized and hope to communicate to my mentors that I am trying hard to do and
excel and while doing so, enjoy the tasks and challenges that are presented
before me.
I have always wanted to improve my writing skills. As a student, my
writing skills are crucial to everything I do. We write often and write a
lot. It has become an inevitable task. We could write an essay, poem,
research or even a letter to potential future employers, so it is really
important that for me to hone my writing skills, and since it is very
well related to my chosen career path, it would really be of much use. I
want to focus on being to be able to write academically with little or no
mistakes. I think that learning new strategies and techniques in writing
would help improve my essays, particularly my writing style and voice.
It would give me an identity and place in the world of writing.
Reading improves writing in
many ways and the amount of information we can get is endless. Although I
may not be a bookworm, I try to read books when I get the chance. I
believe that it is not healthy to limit ourselves in our own little
mental world. Our mind collects certain ideas and styles from what we
read, which we can later integrate into our own.
Many
have told me that one of the best ways to improve writing skills would
be to keep writing. I think that joining the English Learning Laboratory
Program for Writing was a good thing for me since I get to practice
writing after class which in turn helps with later writing tasks.
To be able to succeed in writing, one should be open to constructive criticism and accept feedback. I used to publish my essays online back in high
school. I had written essays that were well received and were said to
have been comprehensive and well-written, but that wasn’t always the
case. I read comments and tried to adjust my style accordingly while
keeping my target audience in mind. It really helped in improving my
writing skills.
In conclusion, I think that it would be safer to say that "Practice
makes permanent." rather than the more conventional "Practice makes
perfect." One cannot become a better writer just by simply writing all
day and night. For me to become a better writer, I need to be corrected
when I go wrong.
Writing about my goals for Englcom has given me inspiration to thrive
for success and has given me a more optimistic view towards writing.
Setting goals for things we want to achieve is important because as
Fitzhugh Dodson said:
"Without goals, and plans to reach them, you are like a ship that has set sail with no destination." - Fitzhugh Dodson
The pictures added physical appeal to your blog so good job on that. To start off first, your introduction could have been better with a more catchy hook like a quote or a question. Second, make use of the many transitional devices for smoother flow of ideas. Lastly, always keep in mind that in a conclusion, you summarize or state a challenge. You do not just include anything that was not found in your introduction.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all. I like your blog page. Haha!
ReplyDeleteOkay. For my comments... just like what Ave Canora said make your introduction more catchy. I guess it was alright but it needs a little more edge to it.
Also...
"Fore me to become a better writer, I need to be corrected when I go wrong." Change to "For". Just it pointing out. :D
The pictures were good. They caught my attention.
Same with Ave again, make use of transitional devices because your ideas seem scattered.
I like your ending because you ended with a quote but I also felt like something's lacking to your conclusion. It wasn't clear. Your conclusion told me that practice makes permanent but it's totally different from your introduction. They have to be connected.
Overall I like how you connect with your audience by stating your experiences in writing. :) Good job!
Great essay! Substantial ideas where readers can really learn from. Good attention grabber and conclusion. However, you can still improve your essay by providing transitions or connecting phrases to each paragraph of the body. You also need to be clear of your topic sentence for each paragraph. But overall, your ideas are great!
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